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  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: Haunting Shadows

    hullo, IamTraunt. i have interacted with you someplace, sometime on this site and we both know a day will come when i will give you a review. let us commence? ...

    Fri Jul 18, 2014 2:43 am
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: Baía

    hullo, ccwritingrainbow! here to return the favour. technicalities Divorce wastes three things : money, time, and love. a semicolon is a strong punctuation. it is used to separate two complete ...

    Sun Jul 13, 2014 5:26 am
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: High

    hullo, Pejch. here to return a favor. technical errors If I was the same girl I was two months ago, I would've worried that it would've burnt someone, but then ...

    Thu Jul 24, 2014 2:31 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: The Inch - The Full Story - Chapter 1

    technical errors There is only me and my love who can tell our story – o ur love story. one should never use a subject pronoun in place of an ...

    Sat Jul 12, 2014 9:47 am
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Dramatic Re: Life Is Delicate

    hullo, jazzydracula! i am here to return a favour. It was special indeed, for it had originally been Annabelle's baby blanket, though for some reason her mother had never finished ...

    Sat Jul 12, 2014 1:51 pm
  • Poetry » Narrative, Science Re: Sparrows

    i think this was a real nice read. i was caught off guard with the ending metaphor. i guess it was because the introduction was too slow for me for ...

    Sat Jul 12, 2014 8:00 am


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