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Re: The Pit of a Miracle
In a suburban town in eastern Oregon stood Damon behind a cash register, rubbing his temples to ease the stress an angry customer was giving him. She was an elderly ...
Jan 27, 2011 -
Re: Winter Lily.
Two hands suddenly grabbed Lynn’s waist, startling her in the utmost degree. She turned around in a fraction of a second and realized it was the most obvious person, her ...
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: Take It Off, Boy.
Lol thank you so much. :)
Dec 12, 2010 -
Re: Take It Off, Boy.
Undress yourself, but slow down. I don’t mean your clothes, but your thoughts so I can drown. Now asphyxiation is one of my greatest fears but for you, I’d sacrifice ...
Dec 12, 2010 -
Re: Free-writing.
I really appreciate the review and advice. I used it. Thank you so much!
Dec 12, 2010 -
Re: Free-writing.
The answer could contain three letters, starting with y, ending with s, but if I may, I’d like to take a wild guess. The answer is no. Yes? Confusing it ...
Dec 9, 2010 -
Re: Let it Fall.
So I’ll walk into the open arms of precipitation One of God’s most beautiful creations You need to ignore all the hatred and aversion of these natural tears Because what ...
Dec 9, 2010 -
Re: Never stopping.
I LOVED IT. that's all hehe.
Feb 9, 2010 -
Re: Doesn't he?
The silly nickname part threw me off. The next line felt like skipping a whole chapter in a book and not knowing what's going on. "My friendly nickname falling off ...
Feb 8, 2010 -
Re: Hurt and Hope Go Together
Hey Bailey! So when I first started reading this, I said an "aw" to myself cause I was predicting what the poem would be about. But then I scrolled down ...
Feb 8, 2010 -
Re: It's Been You- Chapter 1 [still editing]
thanks so much. i'm definitely going to be working on this chapter for at least because this is my first time ever writing something like this, as well as using ...
Feb 8, 2010 -
Re: It's Been You- Chapter 1 [still editing]
I added a lot more and edited it guys! Tell me what you think.
Feb 8, 2010 -
Re: Sanguine Fatigue
overall, this poem wasn't meant to be anything huge. just something simple, sweet, and to the point with a few meaningful descriptions. it seriously came from within. yes, sanguine was ...
Feb 8, 2010 -
Re: It's Been You- Chapter 1 [still editing]
"Beep! Beep! Beep!" Lena extended her arm and reached for her phone to shut off the alarm. She pressed "End" and let out a large yawn. There wasn't anything exciting ...
Feb 7, 2010 -
Re: Chess/Love Game
great comparison with the chess pieces and characters. overall, it was unique and interseting. the "it's like" sort of threw me off. a bit juvenile.
Feb 7, 2010
