poetrymuse

I liked your use of stone statues to describe the situation. When someone's afraid, sometimes they'll freeze up and can't move as if they're a living stone statue. It's easy ...

I like the rhyme scheme. Sometimes people have a difficult time coming up with words that fit a situation and follow the rhyming couplets, but you really pulled it off ...

If I died, I'ld want it to know beforehand. That way, I could say good bye to everyone I loved and cared for. But I guess it's good not knowing, ...