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  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The night I died

    I like how you used the word Hammered while refering to your heart. One thing you might consider is making some of the sentences more vivid and a little longer. ...

    Aug 26, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Grace

    Nice Job!!!! It's me paige btw. Lol.

    Aug 26, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: HI IM ME

    HI Im me I just started this but mainly I'll be posting poetry. Thanks

    Aug 26, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Cemetary Sitting Realization

    I'm sitting here too But I can't be near you I'm not sleeping You're not breathing You're dead and lifeless Cold and fightless Get up and fight The dead ones ...

    Aug 25, 2011


The brain is wider than the sky.
— Emily Dickenson