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Re: The night I died
I like how you used the word Hammered while refering to your heart. One thing you might consider is making some of the sentences more vivid and a little longer. ...
Aug 26, 2011 -
Re: Grace
Nice Job!!!! It's me paige btw. Lol.
Aug 26, 2011 -
Re: HI IM ME
HI Im me I just started this but mainly I'll be posting poetry. Thanks
Aug 26, 2011 -
Re: Cemetary Sitting Realization
I'm sitting here too But I can't be near you I'm not sleeping You're not breathing You're dead and lifeless Cold and fightless Get up and fight The dead ones ...
Aug 25, 2011