plutogirl

this is really good i couldn't even find any spelling errors :roll: not that i was looking but anyways this was my favorite part of the poem because it relates ...

I thought it was really interesting. I found a few minor things but otherwise I thought it was great like an obedient puppy god. It may just be me but ...

This piece was really good. I liked it but I'm going to nit pick anyways. The only thing that bothered me was you're use of the word there. The dark ...

This is awesome i love the way you ended it right there i'd be searching everywhere to find out what happened. :D the only thing i would change would be ...

I think this would sound better if it said that this was the third night instead of that was the third night. Actually, what Aiden meant to say was that ...