plumalicious

Wow, this is really good. You've got a decent story going and a great sense of humour, I smiled all the way through. the majority of the things you did ...

I like this. It's simple yet quit meaningful in some ways. one day, One day soon, He will come and save! There was somthing about this part that Ididn't like, ...

This is pretty decent. You could tweak it a bit and maybe add a few more stanzas. Just keep at it! :D

Granted- You get fired and no one wants to hire you ever again and you become JOB (Just Over Broke) I wish my voice would come back

For Shingi Three edged word A simple word A single question A thousand things unanswered. I sit and think I ask myself Why you have to hurt her. Is this ...

To the crazy author of my crappy life, I’m writing this from this stupid prison, in this stupid cell, with this stupid, very scary looking guy peering over my shoulder… ...

Yeah, I like this! Especially the flowed quite well while i was reading it. Nice work :D

Thanks for all the comments, suggestions, welcomes... I'll try to take the suggestions on board, and insert the punctuation, I didn't even notice that I hadn't put any in :roll: ...

Words A love, a life One is gone A single word And it's begun A heart, a mind Taken away Just because You had to say With the dead She ...