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hey cindy92, I'm not going to be focusing much on the nitpiks as I am for the storyline. It was a little too fast for me. I wouldve have liked ...

Hey GothicButterfly, I'll try to be as helpful as I can :) My heart drummed agents my rids as I stared up at the owner of that sexy, seductive voice. ...

hey lilymoore, about micheal, i didnt really like how you said that Michael was seventeen and had, only two months ago, grown out of watching cartoons and playing video games ...

hey theresnoheroes15, i really liked this chapter. i kind of thought the beginning was a little slow for me. and i was wondering why you had it so that there ...