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Re: That FALL Day Chapter 1
hey cindy92, I'm not going to be focusing much on the nitpiks as I am for the storyline. It was a little too fast for me. I wouldve have liked ...
Jun 2, 2010 -
Re: Blood Tears (Chapter 9)
Hey GothicButterfly, I'll try to be as helpful as I can :) My heart drummed agents my rids as I stared up at the owner of that sexy, seductive voice. ...
Apr 8, 2010 -
Re: Hemlock
hey lilymoore, about micheal, i didnt really like how you said that Michael was seventeen and had, only two months ago, grown out of watching cartoons and playing video games ...
Feb 28, 2010 -
Re: Don't Have a Title, but Please READ! (Chapter 1)
hey theresnoheroes15, i really liked this chapter. i kind of thought the beginning was a little slow for me. and i was wondering why you had it so that there ...
Feb 27, 2010