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all right, so this idea came to me one day. i planned for it to be romance/adventure but then i lost my inspiration. i tried to set this story around ...

hey cindy92, I'm not going to be focusing much on the nitpiks as I am for the storyline. It was a little too fast for me. I wouldve have liked ...

Hey Isha, good story. Corny, yes. But it works. The only thing that stood out to me was the fact that you wrapped up the end pretty quickly. It seemed ...

Hey GothicButterfly, I'll try to be as helpful as I can :) My heart drummed agents my rids as I stared up at the owner of that sexy, seductive voice. ...

Merlin34-- Musical? I didn't think of that. About Facebook, I wanted this to seem in our present time, during all these internet hypes. shubhiloves2write-- I was going to post this ...

this is pretty rough and choppy. im not sure how to fix it yet. this came to me during school. some drama people were involved in, i guess. my beginning ...

hey lilymoore, about micheal, i didnt really like how you said that Michael was seventeen and had, only two months ago, grown out of watching cartoons and playing video games ...

hey theresnoheroes15, i really liked this chapter. i kind of thought the beginning was a little slow for me. and i was wondering why you had it so that there ...

hey misamiera, i really liked this. i liked your word choice and how you used just a couple of sentences to pull the reader in and make us feel what ...

Okay, this story came to me one day during school so I just scribbled it down. It's pretty short. Just like a beginning to set the scene. I haven't yet ...