plaguewritings

Hi!! So this isn't a chapter two, this is actually further into the plot line, probably starting off the third part of the story. I'm just not brave OR patient ...

Thanks so much!! I tend to struggle with punctuation, so this helps a lot!

Thank you! There's not much I have as far as description goes considering this is a sort of excerpt towards the middle of the story. I can see how this ...

Ah yeah, I get your point with the character soup thing. I'll make some adjustments. Thanks so much for the review!

Hey, This is good but I have a small suggestion. Maybe you should add a little more into what the pov person about all of this? Maybe why they feel ...