pla303

Hiya! Welcome to YWS. You should probably read through the rules and formatting things before posting your stories. Generally we try and make people review at least a couple works ...

Just a few grammar/spelling MICHAELWe done with the waterworks yet? Jesus Christ, you think we'd be in the middle of a soup opera. Soap opera, not soup opera MICHAELDon't you ...

Yes, on all three. You have great descriptions and your prose really flows. The one suggestion I would make is that you beef up your descriptions. You've got some pretty ...

From Screnzy. =)

I might, in addition to Screnzy. Pretty new here, just trying stuff out.

Wow. I wish I had dreams like this ;). I would really just change some of your diction around a little bit. I love some of your lines, but sometimes ...

My science teacher asked me to wirte this essay, because I like to read/write/learn stuff about science! So, I'm looking for general feeback, and overall impressions! How will Gaia cope ...

I don't know if this is the right place to put this, but I since they're pretty much the same thing, I figured it was. So is anyone up for ...

Thank you for all the information. It's really helpful. =) Rosey: Yeah, for my Amanda Palmer stories, really, the only similarity between the MC in each story is the name ...

Once Matt left, we sat in silence for a little. Then Caitlin reached [s]out her hand,[/s] and the piece of paper on the table flew into her hand. It was ...

Hiya! I'm Jack, and this is my first review, so sorry if I come off a bit harsh and/or weird. Perhaps a few years from now, I shall see you, ...

Hi, I'm pla303, but I go by Jack. I mostly write short stories, though I did write a novel for NaNoWriMo and I plan to write a radio script for ...