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  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Eternal Serpent

    [small-caps][quote][/quote] [/small-caps] Ok, so overall this is a VERY well done piece, its one of my favs online... but a few pointers: you did have a few grammar issues, (all ...

    Aug 23, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: A Game of Waiting

    haha thank you! no you guys are not hypocritical or nipicking too much at all!!! I very much appreciate these comments you give me, and I will incorporate them into ...

    May 29, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: A Game of Waiting

    People say I live the life of a fairy tale. Beautiful, compassionate, and waiting for my prince to return. Being engaged not only to a rich man, but one who ...

    May 28, 2011


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