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Re: The Fascinating Taste Of Artificial Strawberry
Hi Pirate here; I must say this is very interesting. The idea of strawberries and how good one bite can be and telling the difference between a real and a ...
May 16, 2017 -
Re: DELETED
Hi Pirate here I must say even though their is no story here yet, this does sound very interesting. Your distribution cause my attention and the title as well. Since ...
May 15, 2017 -
Re: Charlie Charlie Is Watching Me
Hi pirate herer Wow this gave me chills, really bad. But that's a good thing you want to make your readers feel scared and afraid. I must say i feel ...
May 11, 2017 -
Re: funeral procession
Hello pirtateslife4me here I must say i am not one for poem reading or the idea of funerals because they creep me out hella bad but this is dramatic. Keep ...
May 10, 2017 -
Re: please stay
Hi I just have to say first off i liked how you wrote the importants parts of this poem in bold. I could actually line it up to create the ...
May 8, 2017 -
Re: Rollercoaster Ride
Hello there my name is pirateslife4me: First off i would like to say that your title caught my attention right away so i give that a thumbs up. Second off, ...
May 5, 2017
