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Thank you all! Yes, this was written a few years ago and I didn't really put alot of thought into it. It was kinda just "write it to be doing ...

Thank you so much! I do plan on writing a beginning to it as well. This actual piece would probably come a little later in the story. I only wrote ...

It needs some work. It doesn't have enough emotion and it is a bit confusing. I am sure I could understand it better if I had read more of the ...