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Re: The Princess and the Mouse
This is just a little story I told my little cousin when she was going through a princess phase. Any comments or suggestions would be much apreciated. ====== Once upon ...
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Re: My new novel's beginning.
I absolutely loved it!!!! It was amazing. It saddens me that one day sci-fi-ish books like this may become reality. Global warming is something I am passionate about, and I ...
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Re: prologue
It needs some work. It doesn't have enough emotion and it is a bit confusing. I am sure I could understand it better if I had read more of the ...
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Re: Nectar of the Gods
I am a fan of Greek Mythology myself. I found the way you told the story enchanting! It had an amazing flow to it, although I did see some mistakes ...
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Re: EllO!
Ello! I'm new and my nikname is Kimber! I love to read and write historical fiction!
Jul 1, 2008
