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To tell the truth I think it is very cliche.The vocabular and imaginitive is horrible, and frankly the idea sounds a bit used. But, your writing does have promise and ...

Okay, so maybe I'm not the harshest critic, but all I can say is WOW! That really was amazing! It sort of draws you into another world. I can almost ...

I wrote this for history class. (I made 100) =) Let me know what you think. ---------------------------------------- Broomsticks, brews, specters, and magic. I haunt you by day, my specter haunts ...

Oh! Yall are really amazing! This is very helpful! I'm looking into Joan of Arc and Anne Bonney and a couple more. I'm still open to suggestions though. I'm really ...

I need the names of some famous heroines. I'm not interested in Mu Lan, and seeing that I've already read some books about Helen I don't think I should write ...

Thank you all! Yes, this was written a few years ago and I didn't really put alot of thought into it. It was kinda just "write it to be doing ...

cracker

This has been no walk in the park I feel like we have fallen apart Open up your eyes girl and see How wonderful this love could be "Goodnight and ...

"Witch Doctor"-David Seville

I enjoyed every second! You described the sword fight amazingly. I tend to have trouble phrasing one-on-one battles, but you make it look easy. There were a few places where ...

Thank you so much! I do plan on writing a beginning to it as well. This actual piece would probably come a little later in the story. I only wrote ...

This is simply something I did for a writing exercise, but I am thinking of writing a story about it. I would LOVE any suggestions and opinions. ================================================ There

Find a pirate ship and try to sail to the end of the earth. =) What would you do if you woke up one morning and it was the year ...

I would like to thank everyone for welcoming me!! =)) Yes, I do love pirates. Perhaps a little too much... I think I am really going to like this site! ...

I see someone has already pointed out your grammatical errors so I won't worry with that. I absolutely loved the story! It was sooo sweet! When I saw the title ...