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  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Seeing Distance

    aww, thanks! it's partly based on reality, a situation that still confuses me. I'm glad some of those deeper emotions I've been trying to work out came through.

    Jan 21, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Seeing Distance

    To anyone else who reads this, I've attempted to edit this multiple times but YWS just isn't working for me. It won't properly save any edits. So it's likely that ...

    Jan 21, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Seeing Distance

    "There's cats everywhere" is grammatically (in)correct - *facepalm* duhhh. Whoops. Thanks for pointing that out. I was actually thinking that the non-sentence at the start 'jerked' in a way that ...

    Dec 2, 2012
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Seeing Distance

    Thank you so much for reviewing :) I suspect a few of those grammar issues were intentional - I deliberately make everything as flow-y as possible while still making sense. ...

    Dec 2, 2012


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