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Re: The Showing vs. Telling Game
Her dark eyes were full of love. They were sitting on a cliff; the rapids beneath them were sloshing against it. She cradled the baby lovingly in the crook of ...
Jun 15, 2010 -
Re: The Showing vs. Telling Game
That totally inappropriate joke had caught her off guard. She could feel the laughter bubbling up inside of her. She was afraid to swallow her coke because she thought she ...
Jun 11, 2010 -
Re: Alice
Hi there captain.classy! I'm not a genius at art work, but I'll give this a whirl. I absoltely adore the detail in the hair. But there was something that was ...
Jun 11, 2010 -
Re: What would your characters do?
I would say...why do I want that? I can't sing or rap or anything. Don't waste your time."~Stawrm _____________________________________ What would you do if you were all of a sudden ...
May 2, 2010 -
Re: What would your characters do?
"What am I supposed to do with it? Aiden works, and we don't need that much anyway. I would probably give it to Rayne but make her promise not to ...
Apr 27, 2010 -
Re: The Showing vs. Telling Game
It was all too much for Mackenzie's small frame to bear. The poor girl was barely more than a toddler. Luckily, someone had slid a chair beneath her at just ...
Feb 13, 2010 -
Re: funny words
Pooted! Hehehehe
Feb 9, 2010 -
Re: Anime From Scratch
Hey there Zumi! I'm here to review for you. I wouldn't really know if the ear's high since I can't see the other one. Maybe he just has huge ears. ...
Feb 7, 2010 -
Re: I have a question about Snow.
I think I can help out even though lilymoore got most of it. Texture: Type 1. Powdery, it blows around, and it doesn't stick to the ground for more than ...
Feb 3, 2010 -
Re: Book in a sentence
Luna(mine):A girl struggles to piece her life back together after tragedy strikes.
Jan 29, 2010 -
Re: Title Feedback
It seems like it would be unique. I would definetely read the back and maybe even the first chapter. Luna
Jan 25, 2010 -
Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read
A Wrinkle In Time by Madeline L'engle I just thought it was so boring and stupid, and uncreative. Jeez! Nearly all of the books in my school library. So cliche, ...
Jan 23, 2010 -
Re: Too much?
So a few days ago I let my best friend read the first chapter to my story Luna. She said she loved it, but there was too much description. My ...
Jan 18, 2010 -
Re: hehe, Character Q and A
Q: What's your full name and what is it's meaning? A. Asha LeeAnn. That's easy because that was the name that was sew into my blanket when they found me. ...
Dec 24, 2009 -
Re: Name the Character Above You
Maybe Rafael because for some reason that name has always sounded tough to me. Or maybe Tate, or Smith. I'm not veru good with names. My character is a female ...
Dec 12, 2009
