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Miles Miles felt horrible, but not because of what Blayne had said. He felt like he'd failed himself. He was a natural charmer; he wasn't used to girls being angry ...

Miles He stopped before going down. The girl that had sneered at him was sitting alone. He could see that her shoulders heaving, but she probably thought he was a ...

Miles Miles had no idea what he was doing out there. Some kid had warned him that he was on the board backwards. What? he had thought. You can get ...

Miles Well damn, he thought when he saw all of the other rich kids at the park. He thought that he'd been doing something unique. He's never really wanted to ...

I've gotta agree with you shadow, MMM! For sure! Even though he's really old and probably on no one else's hot guy list. Billy Burke Come on now! He really ...

So this won't be like any of my normal reviews where I go line by line, but this story seems pretty well off in the grammar department. I really don't ...

This sounds interesting, but it'll be my very first storybook. So I'm going to go all out and save a spot for a rich boy. Name: Miles Atwater Age: 17 ...

I was just wondering if you would review my fantasy novel for me. The links in my signature and it's quite long-7 chapters-so I'll give you umm...does 1000 points sound ...

7. New Life We arrived at the house sometime around noon. “Its ours,” Aiden said, pointing to a small cottage. “It’s small.” From the driveway, it almost looked like a ...

All done, Skins!

Hey there, Skinny! (Can I call you that? I hope so. :shock: ) I'm here to review like you asked. I read all the other parts, so I'll be able ...

I know someone needs a review... I do novels, too! ~hehe, that rhymed.~

Finished, Pudin! And I forgot to say in the review how I loved the last two or three sentences.

Hey there, pudin! I'm here to review like you asked. All of my comments and corrections will be in pink. She stared across the room, grabbing her cigar between her ...

I felt bad for the delay, so I did both of them for you. They're both done now though. Anyone else?