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Hey there, Romy. I'll be your reviewer for today. So red is for corrections, purple is for comments on corrections, and blue is for general comments. Dexter ran down the ...

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Ploy

I haven't submitted any poetry lately, but I figured I would submit this. I wrote it as something for an oral presentation. Tell me what you think about it. __________ ...

Hey there, Q! I'm here to review for you. So corrections will be in red , comments on the corrections will be in purple , and general comments will be ...

Milo No, Milo thought. It wasn't possible to kill someone with their own thoughts. Hurt themselves? Sometimes. But what the girl was suggesting was rediculous. Cree's eyes turned cold as ...

Milo Crap, Milo thought as he pried his eyes open and Cree was smiling up at him. He took his wings from around her and looked away. "K-Kat looked cold ...

Milo Milo noticed that Kat hadn't eaten, but he wasn't her concern at the moment. Cree was doing fine for just being shot through the wing. She still couldn't fly ...

Besides bumming at home, I went to Florida for a week. The best part about that was I went with twelve of my friends and two of their moms. We ...

Milo Milo couldn't help but stammer when he was that close to Cree in the air where everything seemed all right. He knew that it was anything but. And he ...

Milo Milo thought that they were all out of gunshot range. So did everyone else until Cree cried out in pain. "Cree," he shouted over the wind rushing in hs ...

Milo Milo didn't want to talk to Cree. He knew that he'd upset her, but she'd made him mad too. He watched her go back to Fawn. Her arms and ...

Milo Groaning, Milo got into position, the retractable pole in his hand. The human that they assigned him was tough looking. Maybe that was his punishment for talking back on ...

Milo Milo stood in the hallway as Cree went into her room. She'd moved away from him when they were so close and it hurt. He'd thought that there was ...

On my notifications page, the storybook notificatons are giving me wonky numbers. Like if there is one post then it says that there are seven. So what I mean is ...