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Re: How To Save Your Life (H2SYL) Prologue Re-written
Got your PM and here I am. Anyway I like how the beginning seems to be second person, but when you introduce the I part it's like someone is watching ...
Oct 9, 2009 -
Re: What would your characters do?
Psh...been there. Done that-Asha What would you do if all forms of communication in the world were destroyed including talking and singing?
Oct 9, 2009 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [3]
I don't know what the top thing means, but the bottom part is funny 6/10
Oct 4, 2009 -
Re: Foster Homes
Hey guys! I need help on some things about foster homes. I know almost nothing about them, so anything you tell me even if it's the smallest thing it will ...
Sep 25, 2009 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [3]
I like it its kind of ominous I guess so 9/10
Sep 25, 2009 -
Re: Make Up The Worst Possible Opening Line Ever
Okay so like I totally hate my best friend whose name is like so stupid that I can't even write it but anyways she doesn't matter because this is my ...
Sep 24, 2009 -
Re: Shuffle That Playlist!
I haven't heard of any of those, but Aerosmith is cool, so 3/10 1)I Do Not Hook Up-Kelly Clarkson 2)Love Story-Taylor Swift 3)Like A Star-Corinne Bailey Rae 4)Right Round-Flo Rida ...
Sep 22, 2009 -
Re: What would your characters do?
Hmm... to be truthful probably kill. Don't look at me that way. My control still isn't that good.-Asha What would you do if everytime you walked you farted and it ...
Sep 22, 2009 -
Re: Luna
I just realized that this should really be in Fantasy Fiction, so the rest of it is in Action/Adventure. This really won't make sense unless you read the rest. Here ...
Sep 19, 2009 -
Re: How to save your life; prologue
That was very well written. It has just enough suspense that I want to read more, but not too much so that it is overbearing. I'm extremely curious about what ...
Sep 19, 2009 -
Re: Artificial Beauty
Beautiful pictures! My favorite has got to be old lamp because of the odd angle and that it's black and was a little blurry though. Artificial Flower looks really real, ...
Sep 19, 2009 -
Re: Title Feedback
Hmm...maybe one of those coming of age type books, or maybe something with a girl trying to find Clarke or something. I'm not very good at this, but it is ...
Sep 19, 2009 -
Re: Character dialogue
"Oh a fight, can I get in this? I haven't punched anybody human in a long time."-Asha "Psh, who do you think you're gonna hurt, little girl? A leprechaun maybe?"-Stawrm ...
Sep 19, 2009 -
Re: What would your characters do?
"I would go, but only if I had some food with me. We all know how badly that ended when I didn't eat. Whatever the moon is lame anyway..."-Stawrm says ...
Sep 19, 2009 -
Re: Your Writing Insecurities
I'm a perfectionist, so every little tiny detail has to be perfect before I can go on. It is very annoying because I almost never get any work done, but ...
Sep 16, 2009
