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Lol! Look at the naughty kitty. (Even though I'm afraid of cats...) 8.5/10

“I’ll visit. Even if Aiden won’t, I will,” I said, twirling my heart shaped necklace between my fingers. It was the only thing that I had from my mom, and ...

Luna(mine):A girl struggles to piece her life back together after tragedy strikes.

Hey there. From experience, I can tell you that if you were walking in five degree weather with only that much clothing you would have been more than numb. Also ...

It seems like it would be unique. I would definetely read the back and maybe even the first chapter. Luna

Hey there. I'm here to review. That was quick. I liked this, but I think that you should've added in something that had to do with her orginization, or whatever ...

Hey there bobberrules. I'm Danie, and I'm gonna review this for you. Also I see that you're new here. Welcome to YWS. On to the review. I ran around for ...

A Wrinkle In Time by Madeline L'engle I just thought it was so boring and stupid, and uncreative. Jeez! Nearly all of the books in my school library. So cliche, ...

Oh, I've got a good one that I use all the time. It's jitz simply because I like the way it flows off the tongue. "Holy Jitz, Batman," Robin said.

So a few days ago I let my best friend read the first chapter to my story Luna. She said she loved it, but there was too much description. My ...

Hi there Quill. I'm here to review for you. There simply was no escape from the sting. I would change sting to pain since you use sting in some form ...

Hi there Aery. Umm...I'm not quite sure I can review this. It's very different, and a bit odd. I mean you're using punctuation and things as characters. It was extremely ...

Hey Mo! I was wondering if you would critique something in Fantasy Fiction. The link is in my signature and it's called Luna. Uhhh....and it would be helpful if you ...

I like to describe my writing style as unplanned artistic chaos thrown onto paper that somehow makes sense to everyone but me. I'm not the best at judging my own ...

Oh yes! I'm the first one(besides Nate). Singing in the shower: Viva La Vida-Coldplay or Nothing But A Miracle-Diane Birch A bad day: Wonderful-Gary Go or Almost Lover-A Fine Frenzy ...