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Re: Day Light Stars
Hey there VampireMistress. Pinkangel here to review. Just to start out with the beginning didn't grab my attention. And that's exactly what it needs to do otherwise the reader won't ...
Apr 9, 2010 -
Re: Music is life,love and competiton x
Hey there, Butterfly.I'm here to review. So I understand that this is supposed to be a diary entry, but where are the end marks? Seriously I only see 2. There ...
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: Pizza Toppings!!!!
Extra Cheese, Tomatoes, and Mushrooms FTW!
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: Hands
Hey youreit. I'm here to review. I absolutely loved this piece. Usually I don't read anything in Romantic Fiction, but this caught my eye. You should feel proud of yourself ...
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: Designing Covers for fun! :)
I love it! Thank you.
Feb 13, 2010 -
Re: Want an avatar? (2)
Pic of: A Black Panther Words (if any): Danie's new love Anything extra?: A moon and like bluish colors
Feb 13, 2010 -
Re: The Showing vs. Telling Game
It was all too much for Mackenzie's small frame to bear. The poor girl was barely more than a toddler. Luckily, someone had slid a chair beneath her at just ...
Feb 13, 2010 -
Re: Designing Covers for fun! :)
Name (Author name you want on the book)-Danielle Taylor Title (Name of book)-Luna Specification (Anything you particularly want/need. Suggestion of colours)-A blue moon, and water. Also, if it works,
Feb 12, 2010 -
Re: funny words
Pooted! Hehehehe
Feb 9, 2010 -
Re: Anime From Scratch
Hey there Zumi! I'm here to review for you. I wouldn't really know if the ear's high since I can't see the other one. Maybe he just has huge ears. ...
Feb 7, 2010 -
Re: Make me....I dare you
I dare you to review my poem. (You do poetry right?) It's called Doesn't he? Thanks!
Feb 7, 2010 -
Re: The Best for Last
Hi there. I'm not the best at reviewing poetry, but I'll try. I don't really like your rhyme scheme. It seems kinda...childish? I don't know, but it doesn't fit. Some ...
Feb 7, 2010 -
Re: Doesn't he?
-OVER-
Feb 7, 2010 -
Re: I have a question about Snow.
I think I can help out even though lilymoore got most of it. Texture: Type 1. Powdery, it blows around, and it doesn't stick to the ground for more than ...
Feb 3, 2010 -
Re: Ideal Writing Environment?
I tend to write longhand, so a notebook is a must. Music has to be playing, and I have to be alone. Everyone I know is either too nosy, or ...
Jan 30, 2010
