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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Day Light Stars

    Hey there VampireMistress. Pinkangel here to review. Just to start out with the beginning didn't grab my attention. And that's exactly what it needs to do otherwise the reader won't ...

    Apr 9, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Music is life,love and competiton x

    Hey there, Butterfly.I'm here to review. So I understand that this is supposed to be a diary entry, but where are the end marks? Seriously I only see 2. There ...

    Apr 7, 2010
  • Randomosity Re: Pizza Toppings!!!!

    Extra Cheese, Tomatoes, and Mushrooms FTW!

    Apr 7, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Hands

    Hey youreit. I'm here to review. I absolutely loved this piece. Usually I don't read anything in Romantic Fiction, but this caught my eye. You should feel proud of yourself ...

    Apr 6, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Designing Covers for fun! :)

    I love it! Thank you.

    Feb 13, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Want an avatar? (2)

    Pic of: A Black Panther Words (if any): Danie's new love Anything extra?: A moon and like bluish colors

    Feb 13, 2010
  • Writing Activities Re: The Showing vs. Telling Game

    It was all too much for Mackenzie's small frame to bear. The poor girl was barely more than a toddler. Luckily, someone had slid a chair beneath her at just ...

    Feb 13, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Designing Covers for fun! :)

    Name (Author name you want on the book)-Danielle Taylor Title (Name of book)-Luna Specification (Anything you particularly want/need. Suggestion of colours)-A blue moon, and water. Also, if it works,

    Feb 12, 2010
  • Writing Activities Re: funny words

    Pooted! Hehehehe

    Feb 9, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Anime From Scratch

    Hey there Zumi! I'm here to review for you. I wouldn't really know if the ear's high since I can't see the other one. Maybe he just has huge ears. ...

    Feb 7, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Make me....I dare you

    I dare you to review my poem. (You do poetry right?) It's called Doesn't he? Thanks!

    Feb 7, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Best for Last

    Hi there. I'm not the best at reviewing poetry, but I'll try. I don't really like your rhyme scheme. It seems kinda...childish? I don't know, but it doesn't fit. Some ...

    Feb 7, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Doesn't he?

    -OVER-

    Feb 7, 2010
  • Fiction Discussion Re: I have a question about Snow.

    I think I can help out even though lilymoore got most of it. Texture: Type 1. Powdery, it blows around, and it doesn't stick to the ground for more than ...

    Feb 3, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Ideal Writing Environment?

    I tend to write longhand, so a notebook is a must. Music has to be playing, and I have to be alone. Everyone I know is either too nosy, or ...

    Jan 30, 2010


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