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Ok, so this might be a weird question, but here it goes. Can you make a prologue in third person and then write the rest of the novel in first ...

5. Different 5. Different My eyes popped open, expecting that whatever had caused the pain was still there. I was alone, and hidden in the shadows. When I stood up, ...

Hey there Tenyo My novel is called Luna . It's fantasy fiction, and I hope you like it. I would like a general review because line to line reviews seem ...

Hey there, Apple! I'm Danie, and I'm here to review for you. So here I go. The light shone or filtered or something, but just not illuminated down into the ...

Would you be willing to do a novel? It's not very long, but I really need some reviews on it. It's fantasy fiction and it's called Luna. Will you give ...

I would say...why do I want that? I can't sing or rap or anything. Don't waste your time."~Stawrm _____________________________________ What would you do if you were all of a sudden ...

"What am I supposed to do with it? Aiden works, and we don't need that much anyway. I would probably give it to Rayne but make her promise not to ...

Hey Shub (I can call you Shub, right?) I'm here to review like you asked. All of my comments will be in pink. Then I'll give a general comment at ...

4. Darkness & Pain 4. Darkness & Pain I fought against the darkness and the pain that accompanied it. My eyelids fluttered as the impending night cast shadows over the ...

Hey there, I was wondering if you did fantasy fiction. Because if you do I need some help on mine. It's called Luna and it's in the novel section, but ...

Hey there RK, can you review my novel for me? I'm not sure if you do that sort of thing, but if you don't I really just need a review ...

Anyone? Please?

The girl, who had spoken, had an unreasonably high-pitched, and nasally voice. It kinda reminded me of a squealing pig. “Well, what do you know? It’s Josiah. Didn’t I tell ...

Hey Skins, can you review my story? It's called Luna and it's Fantasy Fiction. If you wanna read more just tell me, and I'll be sure to post. Luna 1 ...

3. The Clearing My head was swimming. I didn’t know what was happening, but I knew something wasn’t right. Someone wasn’t telling me something. I didn’t like it. At all. ...