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Re: Reviews by an Angel
All done jemo! Free heavenly reviews anyone?
Jun 17, 2010 -
Re: Where do I Find a Green Rose? Chapter I pt. 1
Hey there jemo. I'm back to do the second part like you asked. All of my comments and corrections will be in pink. "Good night moon," he uttered as he ...
Jun 17, 2010 -
Re: Where do I find a Green Rose? A Prologue
Hey there jemo! I'm here to revie like you asked. All of my comments and corrections will be in pink. The traffic was quite heavy. A lot of people were ...
Jun 17, 2010 -
Re: The Showing vs. Telling Game
Her dark eyes were full of love. They were sitting on a cliff; the rapids beneath them were sloshing against it. She cradled the baby lovingly in the crook of ...
Jun 15, 2010 -
Re: Reviews by an Angel
Heavenly reviews anyone? You know you want one...
Jun 15, 2010 -
Re: Prologue
Hey there, Lady! I noticed that you didn't have any reviews for this piece, so here I am. I'm Danie by the way. All of my comments and corrections will ...
Jun 15, 2010 -
Re: Reviews by an Angel
All done guys! Btw, austenite, I absolutely adore your avatar!
Jun 15, 2010 -
Re: Forgetting (Edited)
Hey there Flower! I'm here to review like you asked. All of my comments and corrections will be in pink. I hear my phone ringing in the background of my ...
Jun 15, 2010 -
Re: The Fall (Part Two)
“What are you in for?” I look ed up from the trashy magazine I was reading, my eyebrows raised as I stared at the guy sitting opposite me. His wavy ...
Jun 15, 2010 -
Re: Reviews by an Angel
All done, Evil! I know that someone else needs a review out there...I have a lot of free time on my hands.
Jun 14, 2010 -
Re: The Evil Within (prologue and chapter one)
Chapter One The loud buzz jolted Darren awake. For whatever reason, that sentence made me giggle. It made me think he was getting tased or something. Besides, the words buzz ...
Jun 12, 2010 -
Re: Reviews by an Angel
Umm...I wasn't sure if you wanted me to do the Prologue or Chapter 1 so I just did the prologue. Like I seriously didn't see the chapter one until after ...
Jun 11, 2010 -
Re: The Evil Within (prologue and chapter one)
The hall could barely contain the thousands of people who were jammed inside to hear the tribute. As far as opening sentences go, this is nothing spectacular. It's not particular ...
Jun 11, 2010 -
Re: The Showing vs. Telling Game
That totally inappropriate joke had caught her off guard. She could feel the laughter bubbling up inside of her. She was afraid to swallow her coke because she thought she ...
Jun 11, 2010 -
Re: for people who don't get their fairytale!
Hey there! I'm Danie, and I'm here to review for you. All of my comments and corrections will be in pink. " S tars so bright they blind me. Yeah. ...
Jun 11, 2010