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Re: Crashing Down - Chapter 2
Hey there Wario! I felt bad about the delay in getting the last one done, so I decided to do this one too. The teacher, Ms. Goa, really got on ...
Jul 6, 2010 -
Re: Crashing Down - Chapter 1
Hey there Wario! I'm here to review like you asked. There was once a boy who was different from any other. He was conceived to be a miracle, to be ...
Jul 6, 2010 -
Re: Reviews by an Angel
Give me more! Please?
Jul 4, 2010 -
Re: The Last Girls in the World ~Prologue~
Hey there jaz! I just had to review this because it reminded me of the Green Day song Last of the American Girls, which I just happen to be listening ...
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: Reviews by an Angel
All done, Flower!
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: Forgetting part 5
I glance up at him trying to figure out what just happened. Did he really just kiss me? Could he possibly like me? My mind feels like mush and all ...
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: Touch typing with ten fingers
From third grade to eighth grade they teach us to type. We got graded on our words per minute and my high is somewhere near 65. I always used to ...
Jun 21, 2010 -
Re: Reviews by an Angel
I know someone wants a review. After all, they are heavenly!
Jun 20, 2010 -
Re: Impulse - Prologue:1 "The Fall of Man"
Hey there Priz! (Can I call you Priz?) I'm here to give you a review since you don't have any so far. First of all, since this is a part ...
Jun 20, 2010 -
Re: ~Remorse~ Summer Camp: Age 15: Brooke
"Lucy! Come on! Let's go already!" I whisper-yelled. I agree with the other reviewer. Whisper-yelled sounds wierd, and I fall for it in my writing also. I've never been quite ...
Jun 19, 2010 -
Re: ~Remorse~ Chapter One: Marianne
The shock on Brooke's face was golden. She took another sip of her 352 calorie PinkBerry smoothie and tried to seem uninterested. I hid the smile on my face as ...
Jun 19, 2010 -
Re: ~Remorse~ Prologue: Brooke
Hey there jazz! (I can call you jazz, right?) I'm here to honor our deal. xD All of my comments and corrections will be in pink. Prologue: Brooke "Brooke, Lucy's ...
Jun 19, 2010 -
Re: Reviews by an Angel
All done Flower!
Jun 18, 2010 -
Re: Forgetting (Part 3 and 4)
Hey there, Flower! I'm here to review part three like you asked. All of my comments and corrections will be in pink. Explanations . L ife is full of them, ...
Jun 18, 2010 -
Re: Forgetting Part 2 (edited)
Hey there Flower! I'm here to review like you asked. All of my comments and corrections will be in pink. Alright, the hard part is over, now I just have ...
Jun 17, 2010
