pinkangel54123

Could you review the first chapter of my Fantasy novel? It's called The Concord , and I really need some help with it. Thanks in advanced!

This is the first chapter of my novel . It is fantasy, and I would be very happy if you reviewed it. Thanks in advance.

This is an experiment in POV, so if it's not too much to ask, I'd like honest opinions on that as well as how it ties in with the story. ...

Whoops! I accidently deleted the link! Luna Ch. 1

Hi there! I'll be your first client! Yay! Name of short story/poem/novel/art work: Luna Ch. 1 Genre: Fantasy Link: Luna Ch. 1

All done! Anyone else?

Hi there, Tiger! I'm pinkangel here to review for you. Red is for corrections, purple is for comments on the corrections, and blue is for general comments. I watched Mortimer ...

The title of this piece is Luna ch. 1 and it's a chapter of my fantasy novel. Here's the link Luna Ch. 1

I've gotten my reviewer 1 badge! I think that I need to put it to work...any takers?

1. Reunion The woman was close; Asha could feel it. Finally. She had been searching for almost fifteen years, and now she could sense the woman’s presence. Bands of anxiety ...

I'm sorry, but I'll have to drop out.

I'm having a dillema, dear YWSers. Something is just telling me that I should change my novel from 1st person to 3rd person limited. Although there isn't a huge difference ...

I'll call a girl from District 2. I'll post the character profile later.

**You guys can write about my death. I'm really busy lately, sorry.**

Chase The rides didn't go off. The Gamemakers wouldn't allow that. I look with wonder at all of the rides. I step closer to one of them, and suddenly I'm ...