picklebuddy7

This is the story I'm writing for a friend. He's going throug ha hard time right now, and I can't do much for him. I really wish I could, though. ...

Omg, I know this is, like, an old poem, but I luff it!!! So sweet! Makes me wish any one of my ex's wld've written me something! xD

Thanks for the advice, everyone!!! I take all advice into mind, but I don't write, like, every few days, so I forget it sometimes...... >< Totally figures I'd forget. Happens ...

The stains on the carpet bleed color even though they're washed clean. The walls cry out in agony, but nothing is heard. These hallways echo footfalls, but nothing is noticed. ...

lol mkay

Thanks eveyone. The sentance that doesn't make sense is a typo. My bad. It was supposed to have 'you' in between 'don't' and 'help'. Sorry for the confusion, but thanks ...

What is this feeling? The one I get when you pass by. The one I see in your eye When you look at me. What is this feeling? What is ...

More advice........please.........

lol kool. that makes me happy. ^^

Why thank you. ^^ And, thanks for the advice!

I like it. It tells the story, and it's short and sweet. Good job. I have really no advice, but I don't know how my advice would ever help anyone ...

The rain freezes as it turns into tears . Is the sky crying? Just like I am? These questions help numb the pain. But then it starts pouring ice. And ...

Thanks for the advice everyone! I'll try to keep it in mind! XD

The sky darkens as I see your face My mind races as I reach towards you You don't see me You never have I cry tears of sorrow Your picture ...

I like this one a lot. Good job! 'of distant shores that spoke of lush green desires amid greying fields. The water swamps my mind in the wash of sunset,' ...