phoephernelia

Wow! That was amazing! The prologue did what any prolong should do- intrigue you and hook you into the story. The actions scenes were greatly written; I could really picture ...

This was great! not hard to read, but a bit hard to imagine. Maybe if you said something like, "even though it was almost midday, the forest was shadowy and ...

I have to say I haven't read the other chapters, but reading this one really makes me want to read the others! I loved your description of the girl, I ...

Oh I love this! The characters felt alive and Hugo was relatable. I felt intimidated by the Lady. One thing is that i think was missing was a a contrast ...

I really like this! Its very impressive. I don't think there where airplanes to travel in the early 1900's though. Apart from that, I was very very absorbed and could ...