phantasm_of_innocence

I thought this poem was beautiful. The imagery was superb. :D Many people feel lonely at one point or another in life, and I think most people can relate to ...

The title of this poem definitely caught my eye. I can honestly say I've never come across a title such as yours. (Or that I remember... :wink: ) I think ...

Wowwww. Major kudos to you! :D In every word, I could feel your emotion so much! I felt this odd mix of rage, sorrow, neglect, slight nostalgia, hate, and sadness. ...

Thank you! I had to edit it a lot!! When I first wrote it, the words literally just came, but it wasn't very rhythmic. It was OK, I guess, but ...

NOTE: I have hardly any sense of rhythm, and this poem was not intended to be particularly rhythmic. It doesn't have a set meter, but the syllabic pattern is the ...

Wow...that was really good. I agree with the others about some of the lines being too long. I'm sure you can edit that very easily. :D I never thought of ...

Is there a way to help me improve my rhythm when I write poetry? Let me guess....read poetry with good rhythm? I love to write poetry, and I'm good at ...

This is a very nice poem. I felt like this when I had my first boyfriend, and you have great diction to describe the feelings of first love. Even though ...