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This is the first poem I ever wrote. It is called The Gaping Hole My life is crashing down around me Fragments of what I once knew piled at my ...

I really like the way you made it all connect back to the glass. I also appreciate the message of the poem because, if I interpreted it right, I've gone ...

This is really telling of life. I am a Christian and I have seen this happen so often its crazy. Im not putting the religion down or anything but I ...

thank you guys for all your help and I will keep it all in mind as I keep writing. I appreciate it!

Pacing Pacing Unable to stop Crazed thoughts flying Pain Pain Destructive in its ways World closing in now Rotation slowing down Slam into the walls Break them down Running Running ...

Thank you guys for your feedback. It is much appreciated because I am a beginner poet and am trying to learn the art. I'll try not to rhyme and will ...

I would appreciate it if you took a look at this and told me what you think. I hope I copied the link right. Thanks!

Hello. My name is Ashlyn and I am new also, or I would probably be in a different topic. I like to write poetry and am currently writing two stories ...

Inside I feel like My world is ablaze With feelings I shouldn’t feel. Inside I feel like My mind is numbing With memories I try to hide. Inside I feel ...

Why? Wake up in an unknown place How did I end up here? I went to sleep in safety And now I'm gone I fear. Look all around for something ...