personalinsanity

I liked this poem. It has some good points and descriptiveness in the beginning, but I felt like towards the end, it turned into a letter. Maybe if you added ...

This poem was slightly confusing for me also, although I believe I got the gist of what you were saying. It has a powerful message behind it if you read ...

HI! I liked the imagery in this poem, although there may be a bit too much. It took me a couple of times to see what it was saying, but ...

This is a really nice poem. I can see in my head all the things you are describing and I went back to read it again once I was done. ...

This poem is very good and really checks in with me personally because I have recently lost my wonderful grandmother. I love all the visual descriptions and the sincerity of ...

Another repetitive one. Old habits die hard. Reviews are always appreciated though! ashlyn :elephant: Have you ever ridden the ride of suffering Taken the path of pain Drunk the wine ...

Feeling What’s happening to me? What is this feeling raging inside my brain? Worming its way into the daily stretch of the life I live Or tries to anyway. Each ...

wow. I didnt expect to get such a response for something that took me a few minutes to write... im flattered:). Thanks for all your help! ashlyn :elephant:

Thanks guys. I appreciate the reviews. I will keep your comments in my thought bank for future use. Ashlyn :elephant:

*chuckles* Thanks guys! It took me about 3.34 minutes to write. I just wanted to post it on a whim.I appreciate you taking the time to review it though, and ...

This is a really cool poem. I like how you combined present and past tense. I also like how you combine both love and fear for the same person. It ...

I want to write a poem here But I can’t think of what to say So I’ll sit here and look at you In an exasperated way. No words have ...

Thanks guys! I appreciate the feedback and will tweak the poem accordingly. Ashlyn

I love how much emotion you put into each stanza. Each one was concise but conveyed the message well. I really enjoyed it. Im just learning how to review or ...

Hi Chardinay, you have a pretty name. Ok, you wanted to know what it was about so here goes: The main character is a girl who has inherited a mental ...