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Re: The Chronicles of Elorenn - Chapter One
Really interesting! When there is dialogue, create a seperate line. other than that, perfect!
Feb 28, 2010 -
Re: Karen and Pingo, prologue
I just revised... so is it better now???
Feb 28, 2010 -
Re: Awakening
there are a lot of grammatical errors and some spelling (i think, I dont remember, oops!). good plot, improve on grammar, stuff like that. do a lot of self-edits before ...
Feb 28, 2010 -
Re: Karen and Pingo, chapter 1
please reply and give me advice! if your confused, read "Karen and Pingo, prologue" Thnx! :mrgreen:
Feb 28, 2010 -
Re: awakening chapter 2
there are a few confusing things. like: ...missed read... Do you mean misread? Good job though! Happy writing!
Feb 28, 2010 -
Re: The Diary of Sara Jacobs- Chapter 1
READ MINE! mine is "Karen and Pingo, prologue". Become me's FRIEND! i already friended you!
Feb 27, 2010 -
Re: The Diary of Sara Jacobs- Chapter 1
I thought the "journal" part was supposed to be italic . Good job! Keep on writing!
Feb 27, 2010 -
Re: The Cursed Ones - chapter one and prologue
Awesome job! It's really interesting! There are a few errors, but other then that, GREAT JOB! =) =3
Feb 27, 2010