penguinduan1

I just revised... so is it better now???

there are a lot of grammatical errors and some spelling (i think, I dont remember, oops!). good plot, improve on grammar, stuff like that. do a lot of self-edits before ...

please reply and give me advice! if your confused, read "Karen and Pingo, prologue" Thnx! :mrgreen:

there are a few confusing things. like: ...missed read... Do you mean misread? Good job though! Happy writing!

Here is the first chapter!!! :elephant: :D It had been five days since we brought the little dog home and totally freaked out my mom, but it was worth it. ...

READ MINE! mine is "Karen and Pingo, prologue". Become me's FRIEND! i already friended you!

here is the non-italic journal part: Well it's the 2nd of March on a lovely Saturday afternoon. It is currently 12: 42 P.M and I am currently in my bedroom. ...

Pitter patter. Tick tock. Everything was quiet except for the rain, the clock, and the desperate scribbles of pencils. It was 3:00 PM and we were taking a test, the ...

I thought the "journal" part was supposed to be italic . Good job! Keep on writing!

Awesome job! It's really interesting! There are a few errors, but other then that, GREAT JOB! =) =3