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I tried to run but the arrow was faster than me and then I fall to the ground. Something pointy was on my back; I turned around and saw the ...

Thanks! I will be sure to improve it!

I liked the element of mystery in this story, but, I would like to know a little bit more, such as the setting and what gift/curse they have. Please describe ...

Thanks to all of you... But, I have edited this chapter and have reposted it as a novel, CHECK IT OUT! To make things clear, I will not edit this, ...

Since a lot of the other comments have grammar errors pointed out, I would just like to tell you about how I like this story. I liked the way you ...

I haven't read Twilight due to constant comments from my friends. They say it's gross and pointless... But uh, LOVE THE ENDING! Goodbye, Bella!

Descriptive and it's a great story. Keep on writing. I like it how you don't really say that he is gone, but instead, you end with "RIP". Very nice!

A very touching story. I would feel the same way. Try to be strong and you never know, maybe, it won't be so bad! Try to stay confident, secure, and ...

Nice story... I have realized, you like blood and murder... But, very detailed and descriptive, and it's, well, great! Keep on going!

A light flashed and tires squealed. Those were the last things I thought I would ever see/hear when I my car went spinning off the highway and into the ocean. ...

I HAVENT SEEN U IN, FOREVER! I miss u... nice flowers! are they in ur backyard? never seen em. DARN, i havent seen u in a LOOONG time... I love ...

A sweet poem. I liked the last lines, but, again, they seemed a little out of place. Keep writing!

Joslynn and I huddled together, nibbling our already stubby fingernails. Abigail and Vanessa sat on their bunks reading magazines, trying to pass some time. It was four in the morning ...

What a touching story. It makes me get all thankful for what I have now. I hope your mom finds a way to stop her addiction. :D

I only read the first half of the story, but, so far, it's really good. The Harry Potter terminology kind of confused me (I haven't even read any... I'm ashamed ...