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...pick you up at 3 o' clock tonight. 3 o' clock as in 3 in the morning (3 A.M.) or 3 P.M. (in the afternoon)? I got a bit confused ...

I like it. Love triangles? Those sure do grab my attention. But I guess the fact you didn't develop that idea sort of disappointed me. Oh well... I think by ...

I've read all the other comments and have found a pattern amongst them. They don't understand! I do understand the story yet I do agree with Snoink who said there ...

Hey guys!!! The little part below with all the... strange disconnected sentences, don't mind that. Read on! (Because there's more!!!) Who am I? My name is Katniss Everdeen. I am ...

The last sentence was... nice. :) I'm such a Hunger Games geek :"But there are worse games to play." I like it. I hated hated hated hated (and still hate) ...

Cute! For such a young model, this is a good "atmosphere" for it. There's nothing that's too fancy or anything. And since I have been in a professional photoshoot, this ...

Hey! Don't know if you remember this.. or if you even go on YWS anymore, but you asked me to read this... and I did! A dream at the beginning ...

it's been more than a year since i've been on yws and I come back to a wonderfully developed and very, uh, good (?) story. please please please continue!

The first thing I saw when I saw the title was 'asian'... Heh heh... I'm creepy. I know, this post is pointless, but I just wanted to say that.

Thumbs up for monsters in you closet!

'How have it been?' The 'have' should be 'has'.... Just a minor comment, other than that, good job!

People say that this book is really bad. So uh, I haven't read it. But, I have a question. HOW OLD ARE THEY? Ok, I am good! :P

I really liked them! I esp. liked the clouds! They seem sort of dramatic. I don't really have much to say. Sorry that I'm not helping. I don't really have ...

Ooh! Scary! Nice job. Since some other people pointed out some small errors, I'm just going to focus on how I liked it. When I first started reading, I didn't ...

I liked this story! I can sort of relate to this. I push to remember little details but what I think I do remember, usually I think isn't exactly right. ...