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I suppose I'll go back and write a version 2 of chapter 1 before I do anything else. Thanks so much for the tough critiques! I never get them when ...

First, I thought her name was Caolynn (or something like that). Or am I getting confused with something else I'm reading? The sprites flew along with her, trying to beat ...

I guess after reading this edited version, there's not much to say now (unless you want to make it longer). :) I suppose one of the only things I can ...

This is really nice, very descriptive, to the point where I was sure I was looking at a picture book and not just words. lol I also like the characterization ...

Chapter One The dry pages rustled as the class turned to another page in history. More than one pair of eyes was staring out the window to the clear blue ...

Thanks again for such nice welcomes. :) YWS sounds like such a nice site, and from what I've seen so far, it's certainly living up to this. Thanks for clearing ...

Kinda, though it's a relatively new idea (and I'm totally putting off working on the one that I should be). It's the sort of immortals meet mortals and falling in ...

Well, I think that Sureal hit on everything that I would've commented on. So let me say that I find this story of yours very interesting. I very much like ...

First of all, why does it just cut off with "wa"? I was getting into it. :) I must say, it's an interesting concept. I haven't read something with a ...

Thanks for the welcomes, you three! Yay! FYI, the International Baccalaureate program is sort of like an Ivy League program (I guess?), except that it starts in middle school and ...

Even though I should very well be sleeping at the mo', I suppose I can type up a quick hello. My name is Chelsea. I first started really reading when ...