pencilgirl

A world gone by is a world found new A change of time is a change of Hope A decade, a century, an age gone by, Leaving behind a Torch ...

hi i am pencil! good job on your first post. your work has a theme of darkness and beauty of expression. it reminds me of the way i write on ...

what a weird post! what is with this kitty avatar. i have a real cat...this is kinda cool

hahahahhahahhahha! good job you got most of it hryming well all of was hilarious. you really love food don't you well now you got me hungry. all i can say ...

wait you are a new member...welcome!

hi i'm pencil! here to review i suspect your new since you have one post or maybe not.whatever, well your work is acceptable and well elaborated. you can work on ...

well it took me a while to read it but it was worth it good job! your vocabulary and tenses are good but you need to lower it on uneccesary ...

thanks for the help matt and esther

your work is very well written but you can improve a bit of vocabulary

sure i am in no hurry

not bad. though permanent immaturity isn't really a problem. i hate being a teen ...but then i love it

yeah don't get your hopes up its not much of a post go on review it i will make it easier for you. hi i am a 13 year old ...

i know how bad it is ducky i wanted you to check out the 4 elements story

thank you for all the reviews and tough critisizm

i think you do a good job with suspense, you should write mystery. i'm a sucker for those, anyway well done