pencilgirl

yeah you defintly get the point and thank you for the lovely review!

hello i am pencil and here to write a review! well i have to say you are not exactly expressing well because of the topic you have chosen. the rhymes ...

thank you all, these are the best comments i ever got since i came and joined this society. Ziggie, purple and now Crique i really enjoyed your review and yes ...

oh dnt get me wrong i was kidding i'm not looking for anyone

like me and..............................................any options?

Where leaves fall as the gravel crunches Their shades of red orange and yellow Make all feel so mellow Winter comes near As the frosty days we fear The cold ...

YOU SAW him eat chicken......i feel sorry for you...after all my cat has better manners than him and seriously who would waste 76 hours, 46 min and 17 seconds watching ...

thank you and i smiled at you'r reply i thought my poem would never be commented flawless. i'm happy you did =)

thank you

now this image describe's unhappiness in one's heart. think that maybe what made this rose so dull so black so hard and crisp. maybe tears or maybe a broken heart ...

i know bolt from certain chatting and trust me my friends he is not right in the noggin....what you americans say.."short of a lasagne"....yes that what he is.....but further more ...

well done on the rhymes. Edited for character spamming, check your PM's. -Grif

amazing work. hello im pencil and also new. welcome and excellent work done you surely took me into a fantasy of various poems since your rhymes were excellent and future ...

very spontaneous. hi i'm pencil and i thought your poem was full of rhymes that were meaningful and not very random. you surely have the potential to improve and i ...

'a world' 'centuary' 'on new dreams to aspire' were all typing errors which i have now corrected. repetition of 'no one' creates the rhythm in the line so i wouldn't ...