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Re: Bubbling, chapter 1
"No." I tell that to Mom right away. I don't want HER to come here and mess up my summer that Replace "that with which was supposed to be the ...
May 19, 2008 -
Re: Original Quote
Yeah, sig says it all ;)
May 14, 2008 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [2]
8/10. Cute.
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Re: Five important questions.
1) Um, theoretically, but I'm no devout Catholic. 2) Getting to know yourself. 3) Nu-uh 4) It's directly opposite. Far, far away. 5) ...aren't we?
May 14, 2008 -
Re: Imagine how the person above you looks like by their avatar
Blonde, long hair, blue eyes, petite.
May 14, 2008 -
Re: Magic of the Four Elements~Chapter 3
Chapter 2 At the end of the day, Alexandra did as she was told. She waited in front of the stables as the sun was still high in the sky ...
May 14, 2008 -
Re: Magic of the Four Elements~ Chapter 1
Chapter 1 A maid turned into the women’s corridor, heading for Lady Cassaras’ room. Her dirty-blonde hair was tied back into a braid, and she had brown eyes surrounded by ...
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Re: Magic of the Four Elements~prologue
Prologue What’s going on, Galen? Is everything all right? asked Suoh. We never use this part of your cave unless it's an emergency. Yes, yes, everything’s fine, Galen rumbled deep ...
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Re: Dreams
It's just a simple free verse poem that I did awhile ago. Dreams Wishing to be taken away in my dreams where nothing is what it seems to leave the ...
May 14, 2008 -
Re: In the Shadows of Trees
In the Shadows of Trees We walk in the darkness of Balboa Park after the Glass Menagerie. A flock of Reconsider line-break; the last word should always be effective, strong, ...
May 13, 2008 -
Re: Holmes
Holme’s Last Resort I couldn’t help but smile at the sight, for what a sight it was. His twitching eyes his bulging veins. Sherlock Holmes, champion of reason, master of ...
May 13, 2008 -
Re: Strangers' Meeting
Strangers’ Meeting It’s funny how Fate works in That's twice in a row, and at the very beginning fo the poem, too, that you've messed up the line breaks. Look ...
May 13, 2008 -
Re: How did you find the Young Writers Society?
Yeah, it was mentioned a couple o times on another forum I'm on, too :)
May 7, 2008 -
Re: Running
Her feet pound the pavement, slapping incessantly against hard concrete. More imagery here, i think, would be good. Her limbs burn, sweat oozes from her pores. Her lungs blaze with ...
May 6, 2008 -
Re: The Accursed Cartographer
This is (probably) a novel not in chapters. I'm not used to writing for an audience, but that is what this piece is intended for - an audience. I usually ...
May 6, 2008
