pegasi_quill

Sorry for the long absence, but here I am, back again :) Exams over - whoohoo! Ok, no more spaming, on with the crit ;) "So lovely to see ya ...

Wow that's brilliant! :D Yeah, I'm still working on a first draft of my novel and it's already taken me, about 14 months. I'm a slow worker *blushes* Anyway, that's ...

Oh wow that's great! :D Congrats! Yeah, I won't be able to say that for the next 2 years yet... Anyway, good luck at university and all! :)

I'm afraid that I have somehow upset Satin. Her thoughts don't seem very serene It's strange choice of words considering the situation - not to mention, thoughts aren't usually serene, ...

I'm saying straight off, I don't know anyting about a bout, sorry. Can't help you with that. The Battalion One dark morning many years ago, A Battalion of soldiers stood ...

That was great :D

Magically bring it back. What would you do if your parents told you that you were moving to a totally different country in 2 weeks time?

Wow that looks great, and very effective :) Good job!

That looks great! :) Hmm, only thing I'd say is watch out for the leg; the right one looks a bit thin in comparison to the left one. Are you ...

This is just awful. I'm all all is redundant here stunned. I don't know what to do. I promised and swore to be as mean to Cinnamon as possible. I'm ...

I'm smiling even though I don't want to. Satin seems simply horrified, but she's trying to be perfectly composed. I'm not surprised, though. Most people look askance at me at ...

Only two days? I'd have nightmares for a week *shudders* But anyway, great pics ;) Yeah, reenacting has it's charm, that's for sure... And totally reminds one of the treasures ...

Totally deserved place too :D *goes off to organise a party* Everyone's invited! :D

Oooh great formatting, reads wonderfully now, thankee :D 09:37. Oh. Somethign more than "oh", a mention of her emotions and thoughts, perhaps? Mom won't be liking me waking up late ...

It's always this kind of romantic atmosphere in new places. It's fun to imagine being comma for example Sara from "Little Princess" who's having a feast in the attic. Of ...