pegasi_quill

Ah, I see. Yeah, I wasn't sure about the younglings, thought it better to point it out :) Anyway, well, I totally understand the difficulty writing short stories creates. I ...

Mom has made bangers and mash. Reckon Cinnamon's first "city meal" must be something else than burgers or barbie. Mom looks still annoyed, but that's totally in vain, I can ...

The silence that had so long held the town has broken. One of the factories further in Further in where? is now nothing but a blaze of flames, with a ...

Above the town, the sky is split and tugged from east to west by clouds. Tiny black holes buzz like reversed stars in the morning light. And below, the town ...

I surrendered to the shafts of Sleep Good opening line Which bright Pain could not penetrate; Blissful numbing of the mind As curtains rose before the screen Of all that ...

Agreed with above - use simpler vocabulary, don't spend time on long and complex descriptions which woud only bore the child.

I usually wait until I'm finished with the piece before I give it a title. Once I'm done, I know exactly what's happened in the story, I know te main ...

I tend to listen to music soundtracks :) LOTR works a lot of the time, as do some songs from Disney classics. However, I tend to stick to the stuff ...

No, it's most definately not bad. Prologues don't always match the tone or POV of the rest of the story - they serve as a sort of introduction of sorts. ...

I'd go for 'til.

Ok, thanks a lot for that :) Yeah, I'm still pressed for time, even though I'm doen with exams, which is why I'm not around as much as I'd like ...

Wow thanks. Didn't think it was that great - but I'm flatterd you think otherwise :)

I haven't written in a long time, but anyway, here you go, feel free to tear apart :) ---------------------- Climbing lift brings heart to mouth, as hands shake with unforgiving ...

I'm all for Poland - though that's rahter obvious, considering I am Polish. I'm quite aware we don't have much of a chance of winning tonight's match *knocks on wood ...

I should be happy. After all, I have met real city teenagers and their anger – at least one of them. In a way, I'm content because of the new ...