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  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Tiger is on the Prowl

    The Tiger is loose in the zoo. Who would expect him not to be looking for an escape? Shorten this line, or break it down into two seperate ones, for ...

    Aug 7, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: What The Hand's Have To Say

    Look at the lines on your hands You'll see a story there, The insignia engraved from birth's demands You'll look, but forever stare. I'm not sure you need the "but" ...

    Aug 7, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Christmas with The Pug

    Cal's Character Contest this is the link: #4 Word: 58: door Picture: 6 **** The door closed. Oh boy, oh boy, oh boy! I got the house to myself! The ...

    Aug 7, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: Favourite movie quote.

    There are a couple I like: Elizabeth: There will come a moment when you have a chance to do the right thing. Jack: I love those moments. I like to ...

    Aug 7, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: Furby!

    I remember one of them used to mimick the phone ringing. Seriously? Now that's creepy. Can't say mine ever tried doing that, thank God. I do remember trying to feed ...

    Aug 7, 2008
  • Media Reviews Re: jodi picoult

    I've read all of them - and most of them are on my list of favourites. I didn't like Tenth Circle as much as some of them, though. Or Nineteen ...

    Aug 7, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: A Leap through Time

    I managed to come up with this while away on riding camp. Read and enjoy ( I hope) :) ------------- A Leap through Time Coffee-tinted patches splay across the horse's ...

    Aug 7, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Witch Trainee, the Prince, and the Blue Dragon

    Here's my attempt at a fairytale sort of story. Read and enjoy, feedback always welcome :) --------------------- The Witch Trainee, the Prince, and the Blue Dragon Once upon a time ...

    Aug 6, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: Potter fairytales to be published

    Only 100,000 available? wow, I got to get a move on. And oooh fairytales related to the HP world really are a good idea... I wonder what they're about? Damn, ...

    Aug 6, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: erm ... hi?

    Heya and welcome, hope you enjoy YWS as much as all of us here :) Looking forward to seeing your works!

    Aug 6, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: The Official Goodbye/Departure Thread

    I'm leaving tomorrow, and will be away until the 5th. Uh, I might have access to Internet next week, but that is more than unlikely, so... see you in August! ...

    Jul 18, 2008
  • Media Reviews Re: 'To Kill a Mockingbird'

    Interesting you should say that - I was just thinking the exact opposite :P. Frankly, I preferred Pride and Prejudice to Kill a Mockingbird - although I enjoyed both of ...

    Jul 17, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hey All!

    Hello there, welcome to YWS! :)

    Jul 15, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Kissed to death - revised

    Cold light reigned over the motionless room. She was always, softly spoken. Do you really need the comma after "softly spoken"? Becasue of it, the rest of the line makes ...

    Jul 15, 2008
  • Art & Photography Re: Maoist Rebel

    That's a really good picture - fantastic shading, goo proportioning, very realistic drawing. i really like the pencil work, and you've made your image come alive - well done! The ...

    Jul 15, 2008


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