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  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Israfel’s story-Siren’s Desire

    First, I want to say that this is so good. It kept me on my toes the whole time, the end was not what I expected. I think you did ...

    Oct 3, 2024
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Other Re: The dancing girl

    I believe you did an excellent job of giving this seemingly simple piece a creepy vibe. By beginning with the girl dancing, you set an eerie tone without being overt. ...

    Sep 30, 2024


Well, if I can't get this chapter to work....at least I will have exercised my fingers.
— Kaia