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“you’ll find the superintendents office. Report to him.” I'm pretty sure it's "superintendent's" ;) There had to be at least a dozen doors lining the sides of the hall. And ...

I'm very intrigued. In the good way xD I thought it was awesome, and I found myself being sucked in and wanting more. That's wonderful! I rarely get sucked into ...

Hi! Here to review ;) A snowy winter plain lay under the starry night sky. I think that period would do better being a comma ;) Bright stars seemed dwarfed ...

Pink fluffy bunnies?!?! AAAHHH! 7/10 I'm very scared 0.o

Okays, I'm just going to be flat out here. 1. well, it seems to lack a bit of structure. 2. I couldn't find much rhythm? It seems some of your ...

Heya! I'm April. :) . Yesh, writing is the BEST! :D okay, first here are the ground rules; :arrow: 2:1 ratio. for every entry/ piece of writing you submit, you ...

Hiyas! Your name is so awesome xD In all the summer nights that had been seen in Cumbria, today was one of the more beautiful ones. Why? I read this ...

Done with Rascalovers! P.S. lovely job, Rascal ;) Sugar, Sapphire, and Megan, I'm so sorry it's taking so long. I've been so busy, and I have a really hard time ...

The west coast?! srsly?! Greetings from Oregon ;)

June> soooooooooooooo pretty, no matter what you say :p Jon> your eyes are not freaky. and nice pic with the mirror XD ~April

Hello Serendipity ^_^ Okay, I found the last stanza to be sloppy, no offense. The line you stuck on the end of the poem was unneeded. Also, I would try ...

Hi there, Rascalover! I like Rascal Flatts too :) OK, now onto the review. Nit- picks His scruffy hair fell into his eyes, as he swung his legs over the ...

Haha, I have lots of free time too. Well, not as much as about a week ago since my piano rehearsal is coming up, so everyone is freaking out about ...

Hello Werewolf girl! Have you per chance read Twilight? Just wondering. Anyways, I'm April, here to welcome you to YWS and review your poem. :D Let's get started, shall we? ...

'Tis simple and elegant; I love it. For once, I really don't think it should be longer: It would ruin the uniqueness this poem has. It seems to be written ...