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This was great! Better than a lot of fiction I have read, and I love fiction. Have you though about taking the main stuff out of this and making it ...

I agree with everyone else. What is happening? They were so exited to see Tiraine after his 5 years of absence from what seemed existence. This is an awkward sentence. ...

Hello again. I'm back and ready to review ;) They came in silence. They leave out loud. I would modify this. Cassie is correct, "leave" needs to be "left". Also, ...

Not sure. I know what you are saying... Lets examine this; As long as I am with you forever, then anything is fine with me. I am a pattern freak. ...

I was introduced to this site by imapoemperson and I have absolutely no idea how she found it! She's also introduced others that I know. ;)

I think a really great story is Desire for Dinner by mystymizer. I really hope it's ok to point people out like this, though I don't see why they wouldn't ...

I like this poem a lot. I like your style, though it can be off a little sometimes. Anyway, lets get to reviewing! :) something was held theft omitted, taken ...

Hello. I will be critiquing this entry for you today! :wink: Droplets of sweet tasting sweat drizzled down her naked back, the heat of the day pulsated feverently through her ...

No problem, I can take a rhyme anytime! :wink: Rhymes are my favorite type of poetry, though like you said in the beginning, it is rarely done well! :) Thank ...

OK, about a name. The name for that sonnet should be YOUR OWN name. I'm not saying there is anything wrong at all in asking for help. Here is a ...

Hello! I would like to say, I wish I would have thought of this poem first. :wink: I love it! Ok, now to start the actual review; Let go of ...

Yeah, I know it was kind of bland. I thought of it and I really didn't know any words that I could change it to so it would still be ...

Yeah really. I thought MY poems were short (I'm not making fun of you I promise) :) I do have something else to say though about this; Short clasps around ...

Hey Demon Twig! I think it's really cool you and WaterVyper are brother and sister, both registered here! Looks like she covered the rules too. Well, I look forward to ...

I couldn't think of a name for the girl, which is why there are a lot of awkward she's and her's. If you have any suggestions for names, PM me ...