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Re: What Is Your Favorite Writing Tip?
I have a lot of trouble with this. Although, I almost always have inspiration, just never have a way to put it in words, or I have writers block. Here ...
Mar 27, 2009 -
Re: I'm new...
Greetings to all! :) Welcome to YWS. I'm very glad you like to write to keep sane, because now you can post your keep-sane-writing right on this site! I can't ...
Mar 27, 2009 -
Re: Babies Created by Design
Wow. Uh... I only think genetic mutations should be used to get rid of diseases. Absolutely nothing else. Super babies= corny and way too odd. It sounds more like something ...
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Re: Pictures
Awesome! I loved these. Uh... I don't know what else to say. I've not really reviewed pictures before! :oops: But! Could you possible grab some night photos... to me those ...
Mar 27, 2009 -
Re: About poems
I agree with mystymizer; the line cut-off need to somehow be different. I don't know what to suggest, but this poem seems a little off balance. For I’m tired of ...
Mar 27, 2009 -
Re: The poem
P O E M it reads out poem. OH!!! I'm sorry iCarlyfan, I never noticed. I guess I should pay a bit more attention while going on a reviewing spree, ...
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Re: What makes us care?
Lets do this! :) What is it that makes us care? Maybe its that special person whom we have to share Remembering things like our first hug or first kiss ...
Mar 27, 2009 -
Re: The poem
Make it longer and I will worship you. ;) Kidding. I would seriously like it a whole lot more if there was more to review though. It looks like darko ...
Mar 27, 2009 -
Re: I eat reviews
I would love it if you would review this for me; It is a poem that I entered in a contest. Thank you so much! :D
Mar 27, 2009 -
Re: Mothers and Sunday Mornings
Awesome. Very good. :) I liked this poem a lot. I did find this though; I would take it all in, never wanting to forget a thing. There's nothing really ...
Mar 27, 2009 -
Re: The Bedside Reminder
A very good piece. I like the truth in it, the way you kept it true and simple (although a little confusing at times.) I'm so glad you began the ...
Mar 27, 2009 -
Re: Fearless Battle with Imprudence
Your words, they flare arguing, battling, my thoughts My thoughts are brave always awaiting freedom My thoughts are free, now, bearing imprudence My actions are rash, soiled, tainted, with anger ...
Mar 27, 2009 -
Re: The Curiousity Shoppe
I know absolutely nothing about sonnets, except all of them have a certain pattern I can detect. I'm still trying to find someone to tell me what they really are, ...
Mar 27, 2009 -
Re: Cut Off
Thanks for explaining that to me. I can see it clearly now! *peanutgallery breaks into a verse of I Can See Clearly Now* ;)
Mar 27, 2009 -
Re: I hang. I LIVE.
I'm going to get right to the point; I move in one direction you jerk in the same. Add a comma between "direction" and "you". Three of the men from ...
Mar 27, 2009
