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Re: hello
Hello! Welcome to Young Writer's Society! It's great that you've had one of your pieces published before. So at YWS, we have a few rules. Let me just go over ...
Mar 2, 2010 -
Re: Colorado freak out
Hello! I'm Peanut, and I will be one of your critics on this story. First off, this story format is a personal favorite of mine; beginning with an action scene ...
Mar 2, 2010 -
Re: Have a Peanut!
Hello everyone! March is National Peanut Month! So come get your share of Peanut! I review anything and everything :D Just so you know what type of review you're looking ...
Mar 2, 2010 -
Re: Acheron (work in progress)
Hello! I'm Peanut (it says so on my underwear!... not really.) and I'll be reviewing your story today. Also note that the character narrating the prologue and the boy in ...
Feb 28, 2010 -
Re: Gray Matters
Hello! I'm Peanut. I enjoy non-fiction, so I'll be reviewing your work today! =D Gray Matters Most, if not all, of society's problems can be traced back to the human ...
Feb 28, 2010 -
Re: Twilight *Contains excessive nagging and puke worthyness*
AHAHAHAHAHAHA. Omg. You're my new hero. XD That was freaking amazing. And you made a lot of good points there; like the whole part about how Edward warns her constantly ...
Feb 28, 2010 -
Re: Report a good member!
I nominate everyone in YWS who has stayed my friend over this last year. *will be a year-long member in one week*
Feb 27, 2010 -
Re: Ban The User Above You! [5]
Banned for being a year older than me. :smt003
Feb 27, 2010 -
Re: The "I'm Back" Thread
Hey all. I was gone for a super long time due to schoolwork and other, but now I'm back! I'm trying to do a minimum of two reviews per day, ...
Feb 27, 2010 -
Re: Seven
Hello Stori! I think I've seen you around before. (I must have because you've been on YWS for a while!) So anyway, with the way this is formatted, it almost ...
Feb 27, 2010 -
Re: The Giver by Lowis Lowry, Epilogue
Hola! You already know me so what's the point in an introduction? First off, I liked your idea and it was creative. Not to mention you got a better grade ...
Feb 26, 2010 -
Re: The Giver Epilogue
So we had to write an epilogue to The Giver by Lois Lowry in our English class. This is my final copy as I turned it in, but you are ...
Feb 26, 2010 -
Re: Promise?
An amateur attempt at a pantoum. If I shall die before you, you will turn your head away. Live the life I took from you, you don't need me to ...
Feb 25, 2010 -
Re: Untitled Story (Chapter 1)
I love it. I swear, right when the accident happened I knew her friends would die. I got tears in my eyes. The only thing I must critique on is ...
Feb 25, 2010 -
Re: The Unfamiliars
Hello, I'm Peanut. Okay, so this story kept me reading. I loved the word choice and the way you described everything vividly. I myself have never written a flash fiction ...
Feb 24, 2010
