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Re: Rider
Awesome! I'm not one to really critique art, so all I can say is great job! I don't see much wrong with the colors, so what are you talking about? ...
Mar 28, 2009 -
Re: NaPoWriMo 2009
I am SOOO up for it... though... I did not know of NaNoWriMo until today, and I was wondering if I could use a poem I just recently posted. Is ...
Mar 28, 2009 -
Re: Well howdy there
Hey! I'm peanutgallery007, but you may call me peanut. I hope you have an awesome time here at YWS! Everyone is really nice and friendly around here, and they all ...
Mar 28, 2009 -
Re: I'm new!
Hi! Welcome to YWS (generic greeting for newbies #12) ;) . Kidding. I really do want to welcome you. I hope I get to review one of your pieces soon! ...
Mar 28, 2009 -
Re: Rawr! I Eat Buildings! (cartoon godzilla thing)
Wow. I really love this! The Dino actually looks friendly on it's face! It looks almost like it could be somebody's giant, cute pet! Also, the whole thing has one ...
Mar 28, 2009 -
Re: Fly
Awesome poem! I can't really review you because everyone else already covered everything I saw that was incorrect. So, all I can do is say, nice job! I hope to ...
Mar 28, 2009 -
Re: Gone
I love this poem! It's really good. Just this one thing; until that hartbreaking August day. You misspelled heartbreaking. That's all I really found that was wrong, and that was ...
Mar 28, 2009 -
Re: Pictures 6
Great pictures! I have taken really cool ones that I can't wait to get up on the site, but sadly, my camera died and our charger is gone! Oh, well. ...
Mar 27, 2009 -
Re: To Listen
Sorry. They were only suggestions and I did not mean to rewrite it. I liked it anyway, because I feel that way too. :)
Mar 27, 2009 -
Re: That Girl In The Mirror.
Cool! It is very nice to see your first work, so you can start grabbing reviews from some of our best critics here. (Not that I'm one of the best... ...
Mar 27, 2009 -
Re: To Listen
Wow. That's very deep. Why don't you take the key elements out of this and try to transform it into an awesome poem? I would read it! Anyway, just a ...
Mar 27, 2009 -
Re: Cats [[Grey Set 1]]
Wow. Are these all your cats? Or, are they others' cats too? Anyway, I think it's a job well done! You're quite the photographer, writer, critic, and every other thing ...
Mar 27, 2009 -
Re: Young Destruction
It looks like other critics got here first. Oh, but I do just want to say, toss the ending line, the repetition isn't needed. The line before that works just ...
Mar 27, 2009 -
Re: To keep a friend
Hi! Let's review this, shall we? And I never see my old friend's face, Toss the And at the beginning, for it isn't needed. for life is swift and a ...
Mar 27, 2009 -
Re: Essay "Inside the Circle"
OK, so most of this was covered. I just found some small issues... Traditions formed through struggle translate at the middle of a screaming circle Try it; "Traditions, formed through ...
Mar 27, 2009
