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Really not a good piece, but I posted it anyway. i just wrote it while being bored... True Freaks I look at the carefully written reply. At first, I am ...

Hey, it's Peanut! I'm here to review what you have here... a poem! Yes, a poem. Kidding. I totally knew it was a poem 8) There is a magic, to ...

Hi! Peanut here. Lets take a look at this; Look at the children with tearful eyes fear within trembling souls ;long, uttered cries. You put a semi-colon at the beginning ...

Did we have to enclose a small letter saying we want a sticker? I hope it is okay, because I did just that. Sorry if it isn't okay... I'll just ...

Yup, on my math test! (It so rarely happens... :lol: ) TPBM wants to be my friend! :D Kidding! ;) TPBM is on YWS more than 2 hours per day

This doesn't rhyme, even though I wanted it to at first. I think it might have ruined the outcome though... It has all been done before, every genre, every style, ...

Wow. That's pretty deep ;D. Allow me to review it; And written lines. Uh... I know I've said this once or twice but... please don't start lines with 'and' or ...

Hey! It's Peanut, here to review you as my 49th review! [spoiler] I'm trying to make it to 50 reviews before the end of today :D[/spoiler] It's the flame, it's ...

Hey! Peanut here! Let's go over this; in warm mellow music. Our music. I would separate this into two lines. 'Our music' seems dramatic enough to be a whole other ...

Hey! Peanut here! Uh...uh... of course I would write a story with you! There is also a group called double-trouble writing huddle. I'm sure people there would like to write ...

but still a continuous race, Don't ever start a line or a stanza with the words 'and' or 'but'! There are many words that can go in the place of ...

First off, nice job. I liked it. I agree though, the rhythm is completely off. Punctuation, punctuation, punctuation ;) ! Also, try breaking up the lines differently. Rewrite it a ...

Four Men on a Boat 4 men on a boat and its starting to sink What can we do, we all need to think Make this two lines Bail out ...

Sit back. Relax. The name will come to you in due time. Trust me. I have had many struggles with this before and, as soon as you stop fretting/ thinking/ ...

I'm going to make it through! Alas, I'm making myself get to 50 reviews first. I have to get to 50 today if I want to do NaPo! It's a ...